My best friends are Sarah Katie and Mike.

I went to the mall, tried on a dress, and bought a pair of shoes.

The best months are April, May, and June.

She eats chicken and turkey, but not beef.

Elephants my favorite animals are in danger of extinction.

Elephants, my favorite animals, are in danger of extinction.

Elephants are my favorite animals, but the are in danger of extinction.

Elephants are in danger of extinction.

"Harry please come look at this immediately!"

"Harry, please come look at this immediately!"

"Please come look at this immediately, Harry!"

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it is

it has

I waited in line, gave my tickets to the agent, and boarded the plane.

I waited in line gave my tickets to the agent, and boarded the plane.

I waited in line, gave my tickets to the agent and boarded the plane.

No change

The team's victory was well-deserved.

The teams's victory was well-deserved.

The teams victory, was well-deserved.

The team's victory, was well-deserved.

William, my oldest cousin, is getting married in October.

William my oldest cousin, is getting married in October.

William, my oldest cousin is getting married in October.

William my oldest cousin is getting married in October.

In 1929, the year the stock market crashed, many people lost their jobs.

In 1929, the year the stock market crashed many people lost their jobs.

In 1929 the year the stock market crashed, many people lost their jobs.

No change

When I was in second grade I broke my arm.

When I was in second grade, I broke my arm.

I broke my arm when I was in second grade.

I fell on the playground, and I broke my arm.

Mary please stop hitting your brother.

Mary, please stop hitting your brother.

Please stop hitting your brother, Mary.

Please stop hitting your brother.